Seren Arc

#10256

I put a TL:DR at the end of the post but i would recommend reading it because I honestly think its very good.

Ok so I made this because as I was going to sleep last night and I just couldnt sleep so I stayed up last night for about 5 hours writing This, im going to college write now for video game story boarding so this is a good test to see if im any good at developing characters.

So ever since I saw Seren I wondered how the story would go about developing with
her and I thought to myself, this would be the perfect time to implement someone whose a
closet masochist. I know what your thinking and just hear me out. This would be the
perfect opportunity to build on the corruption system more without affecting game play too
heavily. Since Seren isn’t a combat character most of the conversation with her are going
to be story driven in order to evolve her character. This particular arc will take about
4-5 scenes. I would prefer to do 5 but ill do 4 for the sake of it being easier on the
game designers if people like this enough ill make a fourth one in between 2 of the scenes
where I think it would fit more. Ill talk about where that would be later.
All these scenes revolve around visiting Xas or Summeredge and its various stores.

Scene 1
This revolves around manipulating the current scene with Seren but only by adding
1 or 2 extra dialogue bubbles. During the first scene with Seren you go to Xas, visit a
couple shops then if you earned enough Affection with her upon returning to the Castle you
are greeted with her wanting to give you her Virginity.

Non-Corrupt: Now this scene as a non corrupt Seren option wouldn’t really change.
You’d do the same stuff but when given the option to be rough or be Gentle for non corrupt
you would pick be gentle, then after the sex is over shes grateful for you being gentle
and you both go on your merry way

Corrupt: The corrupt option would change slightly, when given the option naturally
you would pick “Be Rough” after you pick this option you pick up speed and at first Seren
is like “wait give me a minute!” to which you would ignore but as shes greeted with these
slight amounts of pain and pleasure mixed she eventually stops asking to slow down and
starts moaning a lot eventually moaning to “go faster!” but still telling you to cum
outside when you both reach climax. As your both getting dressed she proceeds to comment
on you being rough from the start to which you respond with something similar to “I’m
sorry, I just couldn’t help myself your just to cute……but you didn’t seem to hate it” to
which she gets embarrassed and tells you to “shush”. This is when you would get the
corruption points and some slight affection.

Scene 2
This Scene revolves around you visiting Summeredge because Seren wants to explore
the city again and you were so nice last time y’all went out that she wanted to go out with
you again. As y’all proceed to Summeredge your greeted with a couple options of stores but
you can only choose 1 because its late in the day and the streets get dangerous in
Summeredge for other races during the night. Their can be 3 options if the creators want
it but as of now ill make two. The first is a music concert you heard about from one of
the nobles. The second is a brothel you heard about from one of the peasant.

Music Concert Option has you going to a noble concert with a beautiful musician
upon arriving one of the guards notice you as the hero of Summeredge and offer you and
your companion one of the balcony seats to which you graciously accept. As your listening
to the beautiful music you and Seren overhear a noble couple next to you talking about a
royal club they visited where they tried every fetish imaginable including Anal. You don’t
think much of it at the time, just noble talk but Seren grows intrigued but then continues
to listen to the music mesmerized

Brothel, if you go to the brothel Seren reacts the way you would expect her to,
with her senses heightened due to blindness she can hear everything going on in the brothel
and asks why you brought her here. You proceed to tell that that you assume shes never
been to one in her life so you thought she would be interested to visit one at least once
to wish she reply’s with understanding and that shes always been “a bit curious”. She would
get a slight corruption increase from this. You both spend some time in the brothel then
head home.

Non-Corrupt: After you return home you proceed to interact with another sex scene
with her where she states shes been excited to try it again since the last time. You all
proceed to undress each other in a very caring manner and proceed to the bed. This time
the scene is in a doggy style position (heh) when procented with her butt your given an
option to “be nice and slow” or “go for it” the non corruption option would be to be nice
and slow as you started to bang her normally. As you go on she expresses interest in
trying anal since she heard one of the concert viewers talking about anal and how she
would be interested in trying it. This is your que to insert it going slowly at first then
picking up pace as she asks you for it. Sex happens y’all climax and she responds how it
felt better then she thought it would and you both go on your merry way.

Corrupt: This differs because this is where her masochist side starts showing up
more. When given the option this time you pick to just go for and proceed to stick your
dick in her butt to which she responds in fright and agitation with “wait, what are you
doing, I’m not ready for that yet!” as you proceed to ignore her and continue banging her.
At first shes annoyed but as you continue doing it you notice shes getting wetter and
wetter and she stops telling you to stop. Instead she starts to moan more and asks you to
pound her harder. You continue to fuck eventually cumming in her ass then you both
collapse tired. You ask her how her first time with anal was and she replies with
something along the lines of “It hurt at first but very good, I don’t know how to explain
it but I loved it” You start to think shes a closet masochist at this point but you don’t
say anything. You all just pass out for the night.

Scene 3
This is where the scene you get with her changes based on her corruption level. I
don’t know how hard it would be to code but at this point the quests will trigger based on
corruption and the 2 scenes before hand have triggered. Like I said at the beginning the
non-corrupt Seren character development will be focused more around her falling in love
with you and realizing that your an amazing person and corrupt Seren will be focused
around you helping her discover her hidden sexuality. These events can only trigger after
the second Act starts because of story reasons. Both events start with you meeting Seren
outside your room.

Non-Corrupt route: After you’ve met up with Seren she asks about wanting to explore
the forest of the elves and that shes heard the smells and sounds are among the most
beautiful in the world so she would love to visit. (with the evil orcs cleared out as of
the end up Act 1 it should be safe) You roam around through the forest, taking her to a
beautiful lake and describing to her what it looks like to which she responds in
happiness. This entire scenes suppose to be just a very romantic date so I honestly don’t
know how to describe it anymore then y’all just going around the forest describing how
beautiful everything looks and how you wish she could see it. While also trying to come up
with ways for you to try to cure her blindness. You all then have very romantic sex in the
forest starting with a nice Blowjob and ending with missionary sex. I honestly cant think
of a better way to describe this scene this that. However her next event on this route is
going to involve the succubus brewing a potion so ill try to make up more for it there.

Corrupt: This scene starts with you asking her if she wants to try something
different and that your sure she will enjoy it a lot. Shes at first very hesitant but you
reassure by stating “Have I ever done anything to you that wasn’t fun?” to which she
slightly smirks, starting to show that shes no longer getting embarrassed from sexual
things and then agrees to try these new things. You proceed to take her to the torture
room, shes never been in this room so she doesn’t know what this new room is so theirs
slight worry in her voice. you proceed to hug her tight and kiss her just to reassure her
that shes in safe hands. As you pull back she notices her hands are bound behind her. She
gets worried but you again reassure her that based on past experiences you know what she
might like. Shes still worried but goes along with it as you proceed to die her up BDSM
style with legs spread wide open arms bound around her body and so on. You then proceed to
do typical BDSM You poor melted candles on her and she screams in pain but doesn’t say
anything as you notice her nipples getting harder and her pussy getting wetter, you
continue to poor more on her as you then whip her. You whip her a couple more times and
notice that her pussy is gushing. You ask her what she wants, she replies with a whimper
that you cant hear, you then yell “WHAT DO YOU WANT?!” she then responds with inaudible
noses followed by “..h-hard c-cock.”. You act like you didn’t hear it and respond with
“well I don’t know what you want so i guess ill just untie you and leave you here” She then
yells that she needs your big fat cock in her wet pussy and to please pound her. You
naturally reply and the entire time shes yelling about how it feels so good and this is
what shes wanted the entire time all the while your telling her shes just been a naughty
slut all this time to which shes agreeing to you calling herself a naughty slut and that
she wants your cum deep in her pussy. You then give her what she wants cumming deep in
her. She then goes limp clearly extremely tired from her enjoyable experience. You both
pass out, you thinking of other things to bring her max amounts of pleasure.

Scene 4
ok so this is the scene that I’m not gonna go into to much detail with because its
honestly the least needed out of my ideas but ill get a couple of sentences so people
would know what I would have done.

Non-Corrupt: You go through Xas by yourself or with Carys to try to figure out if
you can find a cure for blindness. You don’t find anything but as you return to the castle
the succubus notices you and asks whats wrong, you tell her why you were out and she tells
you she can brew a potion but it will only cure it temporarily and for a max of a day. She
can make it for you but she will need time to get the ingredients together.

Corrupt: I wanted to include a scene of exhibitionism where you tie Seren up like
a slave and walk through Xas all the while elves are looking at you and Seren with a mix
of intrigue , disgust and interest. She would “feel” all the eyes on her and it would
result in her getting extremely wet and you both having sex an an ally or something.

Scene 5
This is where all this buildup has been leading, all of the romance or corruption
has been building up to this final scene.

Non-corruption: The succubus has collected all but one ingredient but this
ingredient is held by a very hard boss (I was thinking a dragon) you have to team up with
your party to get this item and Carys has to be a party member. After you finish the boss
fight and take the last ingredient to the succubus she brews the potion and gives it to
you. She tells you to make the time Seren has with it last because this potion wont work a
second time because her body will grow immune to the effects. You take the potion and
proceed to take Seren to the forest you took her to on your third date. You tell her you
have a present for her but that the gift will only last for a day so that’s why you brought
her here (she doesn’t know where y’all went yet) You turn her around and ask her to drink
the potion, she drinks it and as she starts to gain her vision back. First thing she
notices is that its near twilight, the fireflies are starting to come out and what she
sees is the beautiful lake you described to her with fireflies and the moon reflecting in
the water. She starts tearing up so happy that the first thing shes see is this. She cant
believe she able to see something after so long, she turns around crying then hugs and
kisses you passionately, more passionate then shes ever kissed you before. You pull back
and tell her everyone helped to get this gift for her, especially Carys. Its at this
moment she realizes she will never love any one more then she loves you and Carys. You
proceed to spend the rest of the day doing everything Seren has always wanted to do since
she lost her sight. The day ends with her wanting to see you and her have sex for the
first and maybe last time she ever will. You proceed to have passionate love making sex
and it ends with you both in the missionary position (yeah again xD) with her looking up
at you. The time left on the potion is about up, probably only several seconds left. She
cups your face in her hands saying “If I have to have one last sight left in my brain, I
want it to be of the man I love more then anyone else” as her fight fades, your face
smiling with slight tears in your eyes is the last thing she sees, and is forever
ingrained into her brain. You both no longer speak for the rest of the night and just pass
out cuddling in the forest together.

Corruption: Ok now this scene is the exact opposite of the non corrupt scene. You
and Seren both go to Xas again and start exploring around, as you go from shop to shop you
notice the elves from your first visit to Xas tailing you from far behind. They think you
don’t notice them so they continue their pursuit. You both go into a potion and perfume
shop and you notice a potion that has the effect of changing your voice for the next hour
to a much different voice. You walk up to the cashier and secretly buy this and a bottle
of cologne you know Seren didn’t smell. He assumes its a joke for the misses and chuckles
slightly. As you walk out of the store you proceed down a dark alley and you decide this
is a good place to confront the elves tailing you but you don’t inform Seren. You tell her
to wait here real quick and that you forgot something in the store she understands and
waits their. You then approach the elves and gesture them to follow you out of earshot of
Seren. They agree hesitantly and follow you further away from Seren. That ask you what you
want and you respond with something similar to “I know you’ve been tailing us and I know
why. How would you 3 be interested in having a little fun with my Furry friend over their.
They reply in shock “Are you serious?!” then one chimes up “whats the catch?” You tell
them “No catch, you just have to pretend I’m one of your friends, don’t worry about my voice
I have that handled and shes blind so she wont know its me. They then agree to terms, you
tell them to follow you and to come when you make the signal. You regroup with Seren and
proceed to walker deeper down the alleyway, you walk for about 30 minutes making sure the
Elves are still follow you every now and then. You then start to fake worry, telling Seren
that you think your both lost. You tell her to wait here real quick while you quickly
check down the alleys for stores to give you direction. Shes really worried but she agrees
and is left there alone. You’ve go back to the elves tell them its time and proceed to
drink the potion and bathe yourself in the cologne. So Seren wont recognize the scent. All
four of you slowly approach Seren then when your in sprinting distance you all completely
surround her. You proceed to ask what a pretty little furry like her is doing here. She
starts to get scared telling you that “her friend” is going to show up any minute and kick
their butts. You Tell her that her friends not coming, it will take him a long time to
reach the nearest store and that shes all alone. You then push her against the wall. She
stifles a cry but holds back for some reason. You then begin to feel her up and notice
that here nipples are very hard. You ask her what this is about and she pretends like she
doesn’t know what your talking about. You act annoyed and stick your hands down her
panties. Shes gushing like a waterfall to which she also denies and says its just sweat
from the walking but you no better. You then push her to the ground and rip off her
panties and shirt. You then position yourself properly and push yourself inside her. She
looks like shes gonna scream but then she doesn’t You ask her again why her pussies so wet
and you gesture the elves to join in. They start prodding her face and breasts with their
dicks while the fourth one stands behind her waiting for you to gesture him in. You keep
asking her why shes so wet, you call her a dirty slut as you continue to pound her faster
and faster shes gushing all over the floor obviously extremely turned on as the elves
continue to prod her mouth and breasts, Her mouth starts to slightly open but doesn’t allow
the dick entrance. You tell her “I know you want it, just give into the pleasure, your a
slutty girl who just wants dicks inside her, your pussy and nipples give you away,
just…give…in…” Her mouths opens slightly more, then she completely caves, she opens
her mouth wide open and yells “YOUR RIGHT, IM A NAUGHTY SLUTTY GIRL WHO JUST WANTS DICKS INSIDE HER, IT DOESNT MATTER WHOS DICK, ILL TAKE ANY JUST FUCK ME!!!” She proceeds to sloppily suck one of the elves dicks while giving the other a handjob. As your happy with this solution you lift her up and spread her butthole wide allowing the last elf access to her asshole. She turns around and yells “YES, FILL MY HOLES WITH NICE HARD COCKS, I WANT THEM I NEEEED THEM!” the last elf then begins pounding away at her ass giving her
everything she wants. Shes bathed in pleasure and loving feeling every hole filled with
the cocks she loves so much. As you all begin to climax she yells for y’all to bath her in
your hot sticky love juices and fill her to the brim. You all give her what she wants, all
5 climaxing at the same time. As you finish the voice potion starts to wear off and you
respond to her “I knew you’d like it, I knew you just loved sex, see never did anything I
knew you wouldn’t like” She smirks and responds with “your right, your always right”.

Ok now here are the bonuses

Non-Corrupt: Seren is in your room and you can choose to have sex with her in 3 different
ways. Vaginal, Anal, Blowjob/titjob

Corrupt: Seren is now Tied up BDSM style in the barn. She allows patrons to come have sex
with her in anyway. 3 scenes could be a mix of things. Orc guards, humans, Nexilems, maybe
even a horse (I think this would be the most interesting)

Note that I forgot to mention, If you dont go full corruption or full non corruption you dont get the last scenes.

TL:DR non corrupt, Seren falls in love with you and you give her sight for a day. Corrupt route, you awaken her hidden masochist and she realizes she loves having with anyone and anything.

• This topic was modified 2 weeks, 6 days ago by  barajas13.
• This topic was modified 2 weeks, 6 days ago by  barajas13.

#10362

No one likes my 50 paragraph arc

#10363

I really like the ideas in this, some are cringy at times but can be fixed mainly the parts where you put the dialogue that’s going on but overall I like it. Hope others read it because this would be really good for Seren.

#10581

So it has no views so far, maybe people arent interested in Seren?

#10598

i prefer to have Seren innocent and not corruptible. We already have lots of corruptible chars in hte game. I love Seren and would love to haev more scenes with her . At this point of the game we dont have many “pure” char who dosnt like corruption

#10599

@Sezth Thats why theirs two options, one for non corrupt thats super sweet and adorable and one thats corruptable thats more hardcore and honestly I believe its the complete opposite, theirs is very few corruptable characters. The only legit corruptable characters are Ruksana and Meredith and thats, in my opinion, not truly enough.

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#10604

succubus is quite corrupt and trist and clawyn is corruptible

#10605

but nothing happens with ether one, like they have 1 or 2 dialogue options but thats about it, the aim for this is to have a full fledged corrupt or non corrupt character and even with that, thats only 4 out of the games tons of characters.

#10633

you think there should be an option to make succubus “pure” like a saint?

#10642

Yeah probably. Ok here’s the thing, Seren having a corruptable arc would make sense, shes been sheltered all her life so she doesnt really KNOW what a fetish is. The whole point is to introduce her to them.

#10646

thats the point for Seren, she is pure and will always be pure. Thats the point for carys and seren and the requiment to get them to your castle is to have positive morality. And if you are PC who does corrupted stuff you dont have high morality and that doesnt fit with those two. We already have several char who is corruptable . We need to have noncorruptable companions and now we got two.

#10648

I can see your logic behind it but I honestly dont agree, probably because im pessimistic. In my opinion, no one is truly pure so having solely pure characters just doesnt make sense to me. It doesnt seem logical.

#10650

when it comes to real world i cant totally agree with you. but in a game you can create a world however you want and i belive in this game we have characters that can be truly pure

#10652

I guess we just dont agree with eachother xD its whatever, opinions right? Ether way im just glad someone finally responded to my post, even if it wasnt positive towards it xD

• This reply was modified 17 hours, 46 minutes ago by  barajas13.